comment on brian's paper
This paper was good. It addressed most of the issues affiliated with the IFS. However, a trend in this essay was that you tended to ramble on for breif periods. There were also several gramatical errors that need to be fixed.
posted by Guido @ 10:39 AM
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1 Comments:
Guido,
Give brian an example of rambling, so he can actually change it. Criticizing without specifying is destructive - it's like telling a bass player that he sounds too melodic and not rhythmic enough - you're just going to make him insecure without helping him improve.
Also, be extra careful when criticizing other people's errors not to repeat same, in the same paragraph - but its all good between friends.
I was going to suggest the "i before e except after c" rule for breif, then I came across this list. No wonder everyone has a hard time with English rules -
beige, cleidoic, codeine, conscience, deify, deity, deign,
dreidel, eider, eight, either, feign, feint, feisty,
foreign, forfeit, freight, gleization, gneiss, greige,
greisen, heifer, heigh-ho, height, heinous, heir, heist,
leitmotiv, neigh, neighbor, neither, peignoir, prescient,
rein, science, seiche, seidel, seine, seismic, seize, sheik,
society, sovereign, surfeit, teiid, veil, vein, weight,
weir, weird
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