comment on brian's paper

This paper was good. It addressed most of the issues affiliated with the IFS. However, a trend in this essay was that you tended to ramble on for breif periods. There were also several gramatical errors that need to be fixed.

Posted on Markia's Blog:

Very interesting, very well written. You did a good job of expressing the health benefits and availablity of this diet. You didn't really express why it was an ethically good diet, which I can understand, there's not alot on ethics for this particular diet. Another thing was you never explained what LDL and HDL cholesteral were, and why they were bad for your body.

I'm curious, why is it that in this diet men drink 2 glasses of wine and women drink 1? Is that something to do with Greek tradition?